Before I give you all the facts, here's 2 excerpts:
PROLOGUE actions & thoughts
I've always been a dreamer
On the bus, walking to school, & at home with the lights dimmed...
I dreamed of alternate universes, saviors of the world, & if you can believe it, I also dreamed of masked bals where no one can judge you on your beauty or ugliness...
& where he always was...
Waiting for me among the crowds, a happy glint in his eyes. Always promising me a beautiful night & a mask off at midnight.
Only...
Alarm goes off so she wakes up to get dressed.
Midnight hour never comes...
She's at a train station with everyone around her shadowed.
...& I'm alone again.
PART OF CHAPTER ONE
Shinji: "lyrics"
Mitsuki does her 'sexy' pose: "Hey, that song sounds familiar. Who sang it?"
Shinji: "The Killers"
Another girl & Mituski: "The Killers? I love them! Especially their---"
Mitsuki: "heavy metal sound."
Girl: "rad goth look."
Shinji laughs: "Go away girls, you have no clue what you're talking about."
When Mitsuki comes back to their table, she's fuming & Chie is making so much fun of her.
[END EXCERPTS]
ABOUT THE STORY
It's complicated. It's not about romance at all, but there is a romance factor in it. In vague terms, there is a secret people out in the world, with powers. Their ranked depending on this, & sometimes, #1 has so much power that he goes insane from it. That's when #2, #3, & #4 step in to kill him at Fate's designated day.
The current #1, Lian has gone insane from his power, & he's more powerful than anyone, ever. #2 is Riuan his ex-girlfriend. Mentally unstable, far more powerful than #3 & far less powerful than #1. #3 is Shinji, a gang leader, but he's like the old Mafia dons, he rules by his own sense of justice and rewards loyalty. #4 is Jinka, a great cook. Sweet but so emotional.
The incompetent Elders stole 95% of their souls so for the first 1/3 of the story, it'll be about them w/o powers & the drama that ensues their lives. The rest of the story, they get their souls back & they prepare for the designated day.
If you're interested, please email me either a character sketch of #2, #3, & #4 OR the prologue, manga version (just one page. doesn't have to have the whole prologue.).
My email: verite3rd@hotmail.com

